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Fingernails

PAGE One

Pic 0;
Small, black panel, with white text.

LAUREN;                       FINGERNAILS

LAUREN;                       WORDS, NIC WILSON

LAUREN;                       PICTURES, JAKE ALLEN

Pic 1;
Close on a woman’s hand, carrying a circular drink tray.

LAUREN;                       I LOVED MY FINGERNAILS.

Pic 2;
Still close on the same hand, folding over several dollar bills.

LAUREN;                       THEY WERE STRONG.

LAUREN;                       SHARP.

LAUREN;                       PAINTED RED.

Pic 3;
A little back from the hand now, resting at her side, as a hand creeps towards her rear.

LAUREN;                       I NEVER DANCED.

LAUREN;                       BUT I MADE MORE THAN THE GIRLS WHO TOOK THEIR CLOTHES OFF.

Pic 4;
Same distance as the last panel as the hand slaps across a nondescript man’s face.

LAUREN;                       BECAUSE MEN WANT MOST WHAT THEY CAN’T GET.



PAGE Two

Pic 5;
Still close on the hand, again, holding a key, moving towards a car door. Another hand, different from before, has just seized hold of her wrist.

LAUREN;                       I DIDN’T RECOGNIZE THE BASTARD.

Pic 6;
The man’s hands move around her throat. Her fingernails are visible as she tries to pull his hands away, pulling on his wrists.

LAUREN;                       BUT I FOUGHT HIM.

Pic 7;
She claws across his cheek, tearing out troughs of flesh that haven’t begun to bleed yet.

LAUREN;                       I SCRAPED AT HIS EYES AND HIS MOUTH AND THE SOFT PLACES I COULD REACH.

Pic 8;
Close on his hands. Her fingers are again at his wrists, trying to pry him away, as he squeezes her throat closed.

LAUREN;                       I SCREAMED UNTIL THERE WAS A POP IN MY THROAT.

LAUREN;                       THEN ALL THAT CAME OUT WAS A SMASHED HISS.

Pic 9;
Her fingers touch a cut in her cheek, leaving blood the color of her nails on her fingertips.

LAUREN;                       HE PUT A KNIFE TO MY CHEEK.

LAUREN;                       AND HE TOLD ME I WASN’T HURTING YET.

Pic 10;
His hands are threaded through hers, squeezing her palm. Her fingers are limp and pale.

LAUREN;                       I BEGGED HIM NOT TO COME IN ME BECAUSE I WASN’T ON THE PILL.

Pic 11;
She’s buried her face in her hands, sobbing. Her fingernails poke out through her hair, which hangs in places over her face.

LAUREN;                       HE TOLD ME NO ONE WOULD BELIEVE IF I TOLD.

LAUREN;                       THAT THEY’D CALL ME A WHORE, AND THAT ONE DAY HE’D KILL ME FOR IT.



PAGE Three

Pic 12;
Close up on a bedpan. Her fingers are curled inside, so we can’t see her fingernails, and she’s hunched over it, wretching.

LAUREN;                       I PUKED MOST OF THE NIGHT FROM THE PILL THE NURSE GAVE ME TO KEEP FROM HAVING HIS BABY.

Pic 13;
Close on a policewoman’s shoulder, where she’s keying a microphone attached to her radio. Her fingernails aren’t long or even painted, but they’re well kept and have a dull shine to them.

LAUREN;                       A POLICEWOMAN WATCHED AS THEY DID A RAPE KIT.

Pic 14;
The nurse performs a pelvic exam. All we see is the side of the nurse’s head and the nurse’s gloved hand resting on her thigh.

LAUREN;                       THE ONLY THING SHE SAID TO ME WAS, “CHAIN OF CUSTODY.”

Pic 15;
Close on the nurse’s hand. She’s wearing gloves, but through them you can clearly see the outline of perfect fingernails. She’s dropping a long cotton swab into a plastic bag.

LAUREN;                       IF YOU FIGHT LIKE THE TELL YOU TO, YOU GET BLOOD OR SKIN OR HAIR UNDER YOUR NAILS.

Pic 16;
Her fingernail clippings are in another plastic evidence bag. Through the bag we see her from the neck down, sitting on the examination table, holding her hospital gown.

LAUREN;                       IF IT’S BLOOD, THEY CUT YOUR NAILS, AND TAKE THE CLIPPINGS TO A LAB.

Pic 17;
She looks at her fingernails, curling them into her palm. The nurse did a poor job, and the cut lines are jagged and thick, and extremely noticeable across the shiny face her nails had.

LAUREN;                       AND I WANT SO BADLY TO FORGET.

LAUREN;                       BUT MY FINGERNAILS WON’T LET ME.



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